First of all, love your story. My heart pounced when I saw that Eli shot himself dead. And even harder when I saw mullet Jan. I say, keep going!
Next up, does the Alter function like the Unicorn Gundam’s NT-D mode? Like, use your head to move? I would really like an explanation as to why it fried Eli’s brain at first.
I will call the parallel universe the Shadow Mirror World for now till you give it a name. So, everyone from the normal world is their opposites in the SMW? Or is it a tiny change in personality? Also, is Eli considered dead in the normal world?
Also, Eli is a girl’s name and Lex is a guy’s name! Oh wait, Elliot and Alexis. Makes sense.
And finally, what’s with the sudden intervention from the SMW? Are they looking for a world to settle in at so they don’t have to deal with mecha-bird-things everyday?
Yeah, you got me hooked. Keep the fluffball away and keep drawing! Hell, I might even make a page for you on TVtropes.
Wow, what a comment. I’m pretty flattered, haha. I’m taking a break from this this month (December) while it goes up on Mangamagazine.net (and I’m away on holiday) and then I plan to start new pages again in January over on that site – I’ll post a thing here redirecting anyone from this place over there once I know when I’m updating anyway.
Yep, that’s right. Pretty much exactly like NT-D, or Evas.
The next bit might be a bit spoilery so I’ll let you figure that one out as it goes.
Eli is a guy’s name – it’s pronounced E-Lie. Not Ellie/Elly. And Lex can be either, but yeah, it’s Alexis.
That will also be explained, haha.
I’m really glad you’re liking it. I don’t really get many comments. Like I said, I’ll be continuing again in January. And TVtropes would be quite something! Thanks for reading.
First of all, love your story. My heart pounced when I saw that Eli shot himself dead. And even harder when I saw mullet Jan. I say, keep going!
Next up, does the Alter function like the Unicorn Gundam’s NT-D mode? Like, use your head to move? I would really like an explanation as to why it fried Eli’s brain at first.
I will call the parallel universe the Shadow Mirror World for now till you give it a name. So, everyone from the normal world is their opposites in the SMW? Or is it a tiny change in personality? Also, is Eli considered dead in the normal world?
Also, Eli is a girl’s name and Lex is a guy’s name! Oh wait, Elliot and Alexis. Makes sense.
And finally, what’s with the sudden intervention from the SMW? Are they looking for a world to settle in at so they don’t have to deal with mecha-bird-things everyday?
Yeah, you got me hooked. Keep the fluffball away and keep drawing! Hell, I might even make a page for you on TVtropes.
Wow, what a comment. I’m pretty flattered, haha. I’m taking a break from this this month (December) while it goes up on Mangamagazine.net (and I’m away on holiday) and then I plan to start new pages again in January over on that site – I’ll post a thing here redirecting anyone from this place over there once I know when I’m updating anyway.
Yep, that’s right. Pretty much exactly like NT-D, or Evas.
The next bit might be a bit spoilery so I’ll let you figure that one out as it goes.
Eli is a guy’s name – it’s pronounced E-Lie. Not Ellie/Elly. And Lex can be either, but yeah, it’s Alexis.
That will also be explained, haha.
I’m really glad you’re liking it. I don’t really get many comments. Like I said, I’ll be continuing again in January. And TVtropes would be quite something! Thanks for reading.